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In the first two photos, you can see the beautiful scenery of the streets in Beijing. The Chinese New Year is right around the corner, and people here are preparing for it and to welcome the Winter Olympics, which opens on February 4 in the same time.
29 ม.ค. 2022 เวลา 8:43
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In the first two photos, you can see the beautiful scenery* of the streets in Beijing. The Chinese New Year is right /just around the corner, and people here are preparing for it, and to welcome the Winter Olympics, which open on February 4 and take place at the same time.
* ‘scenery’ usually refers to natural features of the landscape, rather than urban vistas
29 มกราคม 2022
Though,it would look more understandable if you split the last sentence into two, but it's not a mistake. Well done!
29 มกราคม 2022
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