Meshkat Ahmed
Unfortunately, I do not have any musical instruments at my home. However, a few months ago I had visited at my friends home and he has his own guitar and I tried by best to play that instrument.
6 ธ.ค. 2024 เวลา 6:13
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Unfortunately, I do not have any musical instruments at my home. However, a few months ago I visited my friend's home and he has his own guitar. I tried my best to play it.
Don't link too many clauses together with AND - that creates a 'run-on' sentence. Good job.
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