Hideki
Hello everyone 😆 In Japan, August is the time for summer vacation. 🌻When I was a kid, I missed the summer vacation so much. But I had a lot of homework to do. 😩I had to do my homework little by little to finish it. Every day, I wrote a diary and solved quizzes. 📖Now I try my best to write English sentences. It's not summer homework. hahaha..😅
4 ส.ค. 2021 เวลา 0:15
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Hello everyone 😆 August is the month of summer vacation in Japan. 🌻When I was a kid, I longed for summer vacation so much. But, I had a lot of homework to do. 😩I had to do my homework little by little to finish it. Every day, I wrote a diary and solved quizzes. 📖Now I try my best to write English sentences. It's not summer homework. hahaha..😅
thanks so much for sharing hideki! great work! The main correction would be getting rid of "the" before summer vacation in the second sentence. Summer vacation is a noun that almost never takes a definite article.
4 สิงหาคม 2021
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