"Demon Slayer" has become a maga hit across the world in 2020. It was hard to meet anyone who hasn't seen it around me, but I was the exception. Everyone was talking about how amazing it is, especial

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"Demon Slayer" has become a maga hit across the world in 2020. It was hard to meet anyone who hasn't seen it around me, but I was the exception. Everyone was talking about how amazing it is, especially its animate! However, I chose not to follow suit at that moment. Not until I heard there were several bullies caused by isolating teens who had not seen Demon Slayer did I truly realize the rise of this work! Anyway, the power of fans should not be ignored.

15 ธ.ค. 2022 เวลา 14:18

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"Demon Slayer" BECAME a mega hit across the world in 2020. It was hard to meet anyone I know who hasn't seen it , but I was the exception. Everyone was talking about how amazing it is, especially its ANIMATION! However, I chose not to follow suit at that moment. Not until I heard there were several cases of bullying caused by isolating teens who had not seen Demon Slayer did I truly realize the rise of this work! Anyway, the power of fans should not be ignored.

Well done! Just a few corrections..Demon Slayer BECAME..past simple as its a past action, because 2020 has ended now! MEGA..typo I think. Animation is the noun (animate is the verb)

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