Excellent job, Kota. Here are some corrections and improvements to enhance clarity and grammatical accuracy: As the population ages, it is becoming more common to send parents to nursing homes. This occurs as a result of the need for medical care, busy schedules of family members, and government financial support. First, elderly people need more medical help. Not only advanced treatments, such as provision of nutrition through tubes or blood treatment for those with diabetes, but also general assistance with daily movements and supervision of medication intake can be required due to the decline in cognitive and physical functions of the elderly. Nursing homes provide professional care services that family members may not be capable of providing. Second, people are too busy to look after their elderly parents all day. With work or small children, people need someone to take care of their parents. Additionally, more and more people live apart from their parents, making it impossible to assist them on a daily basis. Third, in response to the aging population and increasing medical expenses, governments in many countries support the cost of nursing homes. One aim is to keep the elderly generation healthy and reduce the pressure on the national budget for expensive medical services. As a result, for working professionals with elderly parents, the financial burden is lessened when sending parents to nursing homes. In conclusion, people use nursing homes because they provide better medical and nursing services at a reasonable price, which people find difficult to provide by themselves. Corrections made: Grammar and Punctuation: "As the population is ageing" to "As the population ages." "This has been occurred" to "This occurs." "phisical" to "physical." "responce" to "response."

As the population is ageing, it is more common to send parents to nursing homes. This has occurred as a result of the need for medical care, the busy schedule of family members and government financial support. First, elderly people need more medical help. Not only advanced treatment, such as provision of nutrition from tubes or treatment for those with diabetes, but also general assistance for daily activities and dispensing of medicine. This may be required in accordance with the decline in cognitive and physical functions of the elderly. Nursing homes provide professional care services, of which family members may not be capable. Second, people are too busy to look after their old parents all day. With work or small kids, people need somebody to take care of their parents. Additionally, more and more people live apart from their parents, making it impossible to give a hand on a daily basis. Third, in response to the ageing population and increasing medical expenses, governments in many countries support the cost of nursing homes. One aim is to keep the elderly generation healthy and reduce the pressure on the national budget for expensive medical services. As a result, it is suitable for working professionals with ageing parents, they have less financial burden when sending their parents to a nursing home. In conclusion, people use nursing homes because it provides better medical and nursing services at a reasonable price, which people find difficult to do by themselves.