Hi, It is question to native English speakers. This is description of my new product it will be on box of product, I am wondering if everything there is correct. Big thank you for any help. Greetings

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Marek Jedrysiak

7 ต.ค. 2023 เวลา 14:24

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You might not want to use the word "blackout." I would suggest using "darkness" instead so that people don't think your product will make them lose consciousness.

7 ตุลาคม 2023

I agree with Jonathan re 'blackout'. I think 'protect' is better than 'maintain' for the makeup, but 'won't disturb/spoil makeup' is better I think. Other than that, it sounds good to me.

7 ตุลาคม 2023

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