Today I am going to talk about my work. I work part time at consumer electronics retailer. I mainly sell smartphones, laptops and Televisions. It was really tough, but I learned so much and grew signi

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Today I am going to talk about my work. I work part time at consumer electronics retailer. I mainly sell smartphones, laptops and Televisions. It was really tough, but I learned so much and grew significantly since starting this job.

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Today I am going to talk about my work. I work part time at a consumer electronics retailer. I mainly sell smartphones, laptops and televisions. It was really tough, but I learned so much and grew significantly since starting this job.

You did well. You just needed the article before "consumer" and to not capitalise "television"

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