Do the following two sentences sound unnatural?
①She had a complex about her English because her family sometimes made fun of her English.
②She felt inferior because her family sometimes made fun of her English.
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#1 - She had a complex about her English because her family sometimes made fun of her FOR IT.
#2 - OK
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Agree with the comment above. #2 sounds better
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#2 sounds better then #1. You could edit #1 to say something like this: She had a complex because her family sometimes made fun of her English OR She had a complex about her English because her family sometimes made fun of her. (No need to use the word 'English' twice. It's redundant.) Hope this helps :)
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Kecin
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