I have classes starting in the second period today. Classes are still held even on holidays. I was supposed to work on my assignment yesterday, but I was too tired and ended up falling asleep. I have to finish it before I go out today, or I’ll be in big trouble with the deadline. I’ll do my best. I still haven’t decided what to do tonight. I need to decide soon. Since it’s a holiday, there are so many events going on that I can’t choose just one. I also need to make reservations at restaurants, so I’ll decide soon.
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I have classes starting in the second period today. Classes are still held even
on holidays. I was supposed to work on my assignment yesterday, but I was too
tired and ended up falling asleep. I have to finish it before I go out today, or
I’ll be in big trouble with the deadline. I’ll do my best. I still haven’t
decided what to do tonight. I need to decide soon. Since it’s a holiday, there
are so many events going on that I can’t choose just one. I also need to make
reservations at restaurants, so I’ll decide soon.
Your writing is good! Just two small suggestions:
“I’ll be in big trouble with the deadline” → “I’ll be in big trouble if I miss the deadline.”
“make reservations at restaurants” → “make restaurant reservations.”
The rest sounds natural to me!
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