I went to an outlet mall and bought a jacket. It was really cute and nice. It was really bad weather so my umbrella was broken by the wind. I enjoyed myself and had a great time.

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17 พ.ค. 2025 เวลา 23:36

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I went to an outlet mall and bought a jacket. It was really cute and nice. There was really bad weather so my umbrella was broken by the wind. I enjoyed myself and had a great time.

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18 พ.ค. 2025 เวลา 1:39

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