WRITE A 350-400 WORD SHORT STORY Once upon a time, there were a poor farmer named Jack who lived in a small village call Blue Skyland. Jack was a hard-working man and spent most of his time take care of his fields. He has a small farm and a family to support. Jack has a dream of growing his farm and becoming successful, but he doesn't have enough money to afford it. One day a rich merchant came and visited the village and noticed Jack's farm. He met Jack and offered to buy a farm with a very high price. Jack was speechless and can't believe it. The merchant explained to him that he was planning to build a hotel on the lands and offer Jack a job as a manager with a high salary. Jack thought about it for a while and finally decide to sell his farm to the merchant. He saw this as a chance to improve his and his family's life. The payment he got from selling the farm will be enough to provide his children to go to school (and) have (a) good education and health facility. The merchant kept his promise and hired (Jack) as a manager of the resort. Jack worked hard and managed the resort in (every) possible way. The resort turn(ed) out to be very successful, and Jack's hard work paid off. He saved enough money and bought a larger farm, which he had always dream of. Hi Jerry Please see my corrections in ()'s above. Very good story and the only corrections needed were in the last paragraph. Please feel free to book lessons with me if you would like any further assistance. Kind regards Craig