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Mira
All of us sometimes feel like we're stuck. We doubt our ability to make desicions that can change our lives, open a new chapter in our life books or simply step into an independent life. But you need to remember: if a bird with sound wings is kept in a cage for a long time, how would it know it can fly? You still have your wings, and if it seems like you're stuck, spread your wings. A little bit of effort - and see you've just flown over the wall.
23 มี.ค. 2025 เวลา 10:20
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All of us sometimes feel stuck. We doubt our ability to make decisions that can change our lives, open a new chapter in our life stories, or simply step into independence. But remember: if a bird with strong wings is kept in a cage for a long time, how would it know it can fly? You still have your wings, and if you feel stuck, spread them. A little effort—and suddenly, you’ve flown over the wall.
1. “Feel like we’re stuck” → “Feel stuck”: More concise and natural.
2. “Desicions” → “Decisions”: Spelling correction.
3. “Life books” → “Life stories”: “Life stories” is a more natural phrase in English.
4. “A little bit of effort - and see you’ve just flown” → “A little effort—and suddenly, you’ve flown”:
• “A little effort” is more natural.
• The dash should be an em dash (—) for proper punctuation.
• “See you’ve just flown” was adjusted to sound smoother.
If you’d like to express your thoughts more fluently and naturally in English, I’d be happy to help! Book a conversation lesson with me to practice.
23 มี.ค. 2025 เวลา 12:39
All of us sometimes feel like we're stuck. We doubt our ability to make
desicions that can change our lives, open a new chapter in our life books or
simply step into an independent life. But you need to remember: if a bird with
sound wings is kept in a cage for a long time, how would it know it can fly? You
still have your wings, and if it seems like you're stuck, spread your wings. A
little bit of effort - and see you've just flown over the wall.
Hey Mira. Well done, another good translation
23 มี.ค. 2025 เวลา 11:56
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