I respect Japan as country, but fall in love with their food: sushi, rice with egg, various sauces, sweets and soups. A lot of Japanese food are healthy and if you eat these, you will lose weight.

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Veronika Šlõkova

29 ก.ย. 2021 เวลา 20:27

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I respect Japan as country, but fall in love with their food: sushi, rice with egg, various sauces, sweets and soups. A lot of Japanese food are healthy and if you eat these, you will lose weight.

You could say I Love Japan, I fell Inlove with their food especially the sushi, rice, egg and various sweets and soups. Japanese food is really healthy and if you eat these, you will lose weight.

29 กันยายน 2021

I respect Japan as country, and fall in love with their food: sushi, rice with eggs, various sauces, sweets and soups. A lot of Japanese food is healthy and, if you eat these, you will lose weight.

Respecting a country and loving their food are not antithetical! I made just a couple corrections, your text is overall quite good :) if you'd like to improve your English even further, feel free to send me a message so we can have a chat!

29 กันยายน 2021

I respect Japan as country, but fall in love with their food: sushi, rice with egg, various sauces, sweets and soups. A lot of Japanese food are healthy and if you eat these, you will lose weight.

I respect Japan as a country, but i fall in love with their food: sushi, and rice with egg, and the various sauces, and sweets and soyps. A lot of japanes food are healthy and if you eat thses, you xill lose weight.

29 กันยายน 2021

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