We have 56 nationalities in my country. Among of them, the Han has the most population, even around the world. There is a great saying goes that 56 nationalities like the seeds of a pomegranate, they

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We have 56 nationalities in my country. Among of them, the Han has the most population, even around the world. There is a great saying goes that 56 nationalities like the seeds of a pomegranate, they hold together tightly. Each of them needs others,none of them can live alone. Because of the people of the Han live around the country, so almost all the people from the other 55 minorities can speak Chinese. Meanwhile the culture of different nationality mix together. They have a lot of things in common, but they still keep their own culture. The diverse cultures formed the Chinese culture. We rerspect any people from other nationalities, especially the Han just like the old brother tries his best to care about his other brothers . All the nationalities hve the same goal that want to be stronger without any of them fall behind. In this summer, people from different areas visit other areas to experience different culture. Maybe they speak different languages, but all of them can speak Chinese. It's amazing! We have printed the main five languages on the bills.(check the picture below)

25 ก.ค. 2024 เวลา 9:02

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We have 56 ethnicities in my country. Among them, the Han has the greatest population, even around the world. A great saying goes that the 56 ethnicities are like the seeds of a pomegranate, held together tightly. Each of them needs the others, and none of them can live alone. Because the Han people live all around the country, almost all people from the other 55 minorities can speak Chinese. Meanwhile, the cultures of different ethnicities mix together. They have many things in common, but they still keep their own distinct identity. These diverse cultures together form Chinese culture. We respect all people from other ethnicities, especially the Han, who like an older brother tries his best to care for his other brothers. All the ethnicities have the same goal: to be stronger without any of the others falling behind. During the summer, people from across the country visit other areas to experience different cultures. Maybe they speak different languages, but all of them can speak Chinese. It's amazing! The main five languages are printed on our bills (check the picture below).

Good job! The most significant correction is that you should use the word “ethnicity” instead of “nationality.” Nationality means citizenship to a country/nation, whereas ethnicity means cultural heritage attributed to an ethnic group. Every person with a Chinese passport shares one nationality (Chinese) but a single nation can contain many, many different ethnicities, exactly as you describe in your writing sample.

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