Good morning. I really hate summer in Japan because it is so hot and humid every day. I had a part-time job yesterday, and it was very hard to work in such hot weather. I felt tired and sweaty all day. I don’t have any special plans today, but I have to study German because I want to improve my grammar and vocabulary. I hope I can study well and have a relaxing day.
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Good morning. I really hate summer in Japan because it is so hot and humid every day. I had a part-time job yesterday, and it was very hard to work in such hot weather. I felt tired and sweaty all day. I don’t have any special plans today, but I have to study German because I want to improve my grammar and vocabulary. I hope I can study well and have a relaxing day.
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Your writing is clear, fluent, and very natural. You describe your feelings and your plans in a logical way, and your grammar is accurate throughout. No corrections were needed apart from optional stylistic alternatives. Excellent work, keep it up! 😊
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