About three years ago, I went to Taiwan on a school trip. It was my first trip abroad. In Taiwan, we went to Jiufen and other places. I ate a lot of delicious Chinese food and had a great time with my

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About three years ago, I went to Taiwan on a school trip. It was my first trip abroad. In Taiwan, we went to Jiufen and other places. I ate a lot of delicious Chinese food and had a great time with my friends! I hope to go back when the Coronavirus situation settles down！

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About three years ago, I went to Taiwan on a school trip. It was my first trip abroad. We went to Jiufen and other places. I ate a lot of delicious Chinese food and had a great time with my friends! I hope to go back when the Coronavirus situation settles down!

Good job, Yuma. I want to go visit Taiwan again too :)

16 มิถุนายน 2022

About three years ago, I went to Taiwan on a school trip. I remember it was my first trip abroad. In Taiwan, we went to Jiufen and other places, I ate a lot of delicious Chinese food and had a great time with my friends! I hope to go back when the Coronavirus situation/pandemic settles down！

Good work. Let's hope we can put this pandemic behind us soon.

15 มิถุนายน 2022

About three years ago, I went to Taiwan on a school trip which was my first trip abroad. There, we went to Jiufen and other places. I ate a lot of delicious Chinese food and had a great time with my friends! I hope to go back when the coronavirus situation settles down！

Well written. Try use relative clauses to make your sentences longer. I can show you how to write complex sentences. Your English is good and it is an easy lesson for you. It will help your English develop more. Take care.

15 มิถุนายน 2022

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