I think credit cards are very useful tool. It is because I can buy products when I need them, even if I don't have the money then. I often use my credit cards. However, I think it's a disadvantage to

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I think credit cards are very useful tool. It is because I can buy products when I need them, even if I don't have the money then. I often use my credit cards. However, I think it's a disadvantage to spend too much money. 💵😮‍💨 I think we need to know the dangers before we have a credit card.

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I think credit cards are very useful tool because I can buy products when I need them, even if I don't have the money at the time. I often use my credit cards. However, it's a disadvantage to spend too much money. 💵😮‍💨 I think we need to know the dangers before we have a credit card.

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