Hi Sheitza, this was very well done. I made a few corrections to add to the fluency as well as a few grammatical errors. I hope this helps.

English is different from Spanish in this way: You always have to have a subject pronoun. For example: “Yo tengo un gato. Es negro.” But in English, you have to say, “I have a cat. HE is black.” You have to add the word ‘HE’ to the second sentence.