Karasu
Is this sentence natural English?

"The more the gap between reason and instinct is widening, the more his personality is distorted"

This is the literary expression for a two-faced man.
Could you check if this is natural English, and please advise if there is better expression for this sentence!

8 พ.ค. 2019 เวลา 13:04
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"The more the gap between reason and instinct is widened, the more his personality is distorted"

Great sentence.

DISTORTED is indicative.
For consistency, WIDENED should be indicative too.

Good job!
8 พฤษภาคม 2019