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As Christmas gets closer, I’ve started to see pretty lights around town. But honestly, my favorite event is Halloween, so I feel sad that it ended so soon. What I love most about Halloween is its dark and mysterious mood. I really like the old-fashioned decorations, and the jack-o’-lanterns are so cute! At Disneyland, many people wear costumes. I don’t usually dress up, but I love looking at everyone’s amazing outfits. I go to Disney every year during the Halloween season, and seeing all the cool costumes and spooky decorations makes me so happy. When I see a character I like, I get super excited. Halloween doesn't last long, but it always gives me a special feeling and fun memories that no other event can.I can't wait for next year's Halloween! I don't plan on dressing up again next year, but I want to hang out with friends more and have an even more fun Halloween than this year!
13 พ.ย. 2025 เวลา 14:35
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As Christmas gets closer, I’ve started to see pretty lights around town, but
honestly, my favorite holiday is Halloween, so I feel sad that it ended so soon.
What I love most about Halloween is its dark and mysterious mood. I really like
the old-fashioned decorations, and the jack-o’-lanterns are so cute! At
Disneyland, many people wear costumes. I don’t usually dress up, but I love
looking at everyone’s amazing outfits. I go to Disney every year during the
Halloween season, and seeing all the cool costumes and spooky decorations makes
me so happy. When I see a character I like, I get super excited. Halloween
doesn't last long, but it always gives me a special feeling and fun memories
that no other holiday can. I can't wait for next year's Halloween! I don't plan on
dressing up again next year, but I want to hang out with friends more and have
an even more fun Halloween than this year!
Fantastic job! You write with a very natural flow. The only thing I would change is that special days like Halloween are called "holidays," while fun things we go do with others, like trick-or-treating and parties, are called "events."
14 พ.ย. 2025 เวลา 13:59
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