First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Dear all,
So happy i can join italki make friends with yours.
I am Besty,living in GZ.
My graduation and business English.
Now I work in a foreign trade company for near 1 years.
And I want have more opportunity to Communication English with you.

I'm so happy to have joined italki and hope to make many friends. My name is Besty and I live in GZ. I graduated in Business English and have worked in a foreign trade company for almost a year now. I would like to have more opportunities to communicate in English and believe italki will help me with this.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Dear all,
So happy i can join italki make friends with yours.
I am Besty,living in GZ.
My graduation and business English.
Now I work in a foreign trade company for near 1 years.
And I want have more opportunity to Communication English with you.

Best regards!
Betsy

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Hmmm...
This site is very interesting....
People do correct your sentences!
Just dropped by as you had me as your friend.

Let me try my hand on your last entry.
Much of your sentence structures and usages seem to follow those of Chinese language.
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So happy-->I am so happy (that) [English often puts the subject of 'emotions' + verb 'BE' at the beginning. Seems rather redundant, doesn't it?  vs 'Hengaoxing...']

join italki make-->join italki and(to) make

friends with yours-->friends with you [yours is possessive - nide.  By the way, 'yours' does not denote plural, if that was what was in your mind, trying to make numbers agree with friends(plural).  'you' is used as both plural and singular. ]

for near 1 years-->for about a(one) year/for nearly a year
['years' is plural--English is very petty about numbers.  one year, two years, three years, etc....]

communicate English-->communicate in English [communicate/talk/speak + IN + English/French/Chinese,etc.  'IN' has to be there.  Don't ask me why. You just have to get used to this usage and pattern of expression. ]

---As a Chinese speaker, you will need to pay much attention to verb tenses, number agreements, prepositions, and phrasal verbs(verbs + prepositions).
--Good luck with your English learning!

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Dear all,
I am so happy that I can join italki and it is a great platform to make new friends.
I am Besty and I live in GZ. I am doing my degree in business management in English.
I currently work in a foreign trade company. It's been a year since joined the company.
And I will take this platform as an opportunity to communicate in English with you.

Best regards!
Betsy

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Dear all,
So happy i can join italki make friends with yours.
I am Besty,living in GZ. 
I graduated in business English.
Now I work in a foreign trade company for near 1 years.
And I would like to  have more opportunities to Communicate English with you.

Best regards!
Betsy