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Three sentences about a photo. 1.- The colleagues are celebrating their job promotion. 2.- The colleagues are clicking the glasses because they have been promoted. 3.- The colleagues are toasting to celebrate the successful business meeting.

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Three sentences about a photo.

1.- The colleagues are celebrating their job promotion. (or "a promotion"; maybe all of them have received a promotion; maybe one has received it)
2.- The colleagues are clinking their glasses because they have been promoted. (Note "to clink" - or you can just say "toasting their promotion". Great job using the passive voice!)
3.- The colleagues are toasting to celebrate a successful business meeting. (Use "a" because it's the first time you mention "business meeting". Afterward, you can use "the":
I went to a business meeting last Tuesday. The meeting was very interesting.

Cristina...very well done! I really like this idea of writing three sentences about a photo, many thanks. I hope you continue to enjoy using this idea to practice your written English. And I look forward to reading more of your sentences!

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Three sentences about a photo.

1.- The colleagues are celebrating their job promotion.
2.- The colleagues are clicking the glasses because they have been promoted.
3.- The colleagues are toasting to celebrate the successful business meeting.

All correct!

My only suggestion, for sentence #2:
2.- The colleagues are clicking the [clinking their] glasses because they have been promoted.

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