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Something Always Troubles Me In this world ,there are different kinds of girls,who wear long hair or short hair,who have big eyes or small ones, who are tall or not that tall.But they are all troubled by the same probelm ---->weight .Every girl ,even the super model,thinks that her shape is not that good .So do I ! I have tried almost four ways to lose weight .Three years ago ,I graduated from my high school and began something to become fit and slim . The first method I tried was acupuncture,which is a traditional Chinese therapy.It can be used not only in disease-curing but also in the field of weight-losing.The memory of my first step into the acupuncture room is still clear in my mind .It seemed that my whole body was trembling . The second method I tried was to be on diet .During those monthes when I was on diet ,I reduced the amounts of food I had everyday .To be frankly ,it did work.But it is not that healthy .I mean not healthy not only mentally but also physically .It is much easier for a hungry girl to get pissed off than a normal one .I was always in bad mood when i was on diet .That's why I stop that. The third method I used to lose weight was jogging! That's my favorite . In China ,especially in Shanghai ,most of the girls don't like do some sports,they think too much exercise would make them very strong ,I mean full of muscle!But I am lucky, my friend is an athlete and he teaches how to exercise to keep fit .But I don't jog in winter .Because it is too cold in Shanghai's winter.And I prefer exercise outside rather than in gym .Everytime I run on a treadmill,I do feel trapped . The fourth method is dancing ,which is also a good way to lose weight .So much to say about dancing .Every week ,I go to a dancing school near my campus to learn belly dance .While I am learning belly dance,I am also losing weight .From my dancing class ,I knew some special girls who are all very interested in fashion,dancing and beautiful things . Last but not least ,without health ,I can do nothing ! So lose weight to live a better life !^_^

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你也是上海的啊,我改写了你的作文,也是自己的一种提高.
For all the girls in this world,no matter where do you come from,no matter what the color of your skin is,no matter you wear long hair or short hair,your eyes are big or small,usually all fear one thing in common:growing fat!

Well-preserved girls,even those super models seldom feel satisfied with their shapes! And I am not the exception,of course.Nevertheless,I have tried 4 different methods in order to keep fit and slim.Here's how:
I tried acupuncture to lose weight first.Apart from curing the diseases,this Chinese traditional therapy also has good effect on weight-losing.The memory on that day still lingered in my brain when my whole body was shaking after seeing hundreds if not thousands of acupuncture needles were just pricking on one man's skin.

The second method I tried was to go on a diet.I simply reduced the amount of food I ate on a daily basis,and I have to admit that it did work at one moment,well,at least physically....But for my mental status,it was a different story.I found myself became impatient,and was more easily to get pissed off than most normal times even though the unhappiness was brought about just from a trifle.Anyway,It's not uncommon to think that anyone in hungry necessarily won't have a good mood I mean.After clearing my mind again,I decided to give up this unhealthy extremity.

Third method seemed to be healthy,operational,and cost-free...........That's jogging!Yeah,I like it!Chinese girls,especially those in sourthern regions,don't prefer body exercises and sports very much;for they are worried if they will become muscular after exercising.Lucky,one of my friends is an athlete,she teaches me how to keep fit while reducing such problem to the minimum level.But I don't like jogging  in winter,although I prefer doing it outside rather than in a gym,for I just can't stand the cold winter in Shanghai!

The fourth method is about dancing.Recently,I have been keen on learning belly dance.I go to a dance training school nearby my campus every week and I won't stop dancing until I am sweating all over.I do feel relaxed and what's more, I have a sense that the fat is burning away.Besides,I made some new friends there, with whom I would like to share the experiences on shopping,dancing,fashion...etc.



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