[ 203 Shanghai trip on 2017 ] Would you mind correcting my essay or writing ? If you were me, how would 
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Which part should I describe in detail? I hope my explanations are more clear. I hope you can understand this. Sincerely. My first China trip was in Shanghai on November of 2017. I looked back my memory and experience what I share with you. The whether was sunny and not humid. I stayed at a guest house in central Shanghai for three nights, the price was around 10 USD per night. It was around ten beds of one rooms. There is bar and a pool table on the top of roof terrace. It play American hit charts and quite cool. I went to the high building on the night dulling my staying, I don’t remember which day was. Surely, the building is second higher in Shanghai. I love the high building of the view and stayed at over half hour maybe. It was amazing, fantastic and looks like jewelry of urban city. I feel like to visit Shanghai for the first time in two year. presumably, visiting the other cities near from Shanghai using express train.