Exercise: translation
The way man can conciliate the imperatives of authority with his inner conscious voice is a permanente problem of human/mankind society. It solution is more or less difficult regarding type of government and era but, any way, it could never totaly disappeared. The present book has not the ambition to solve it, it just tries to study the reactions of the individu placed at the center/centre of a conflict between his conscious and the authority. Also this is a work which tries to explore by scientist way a human problem of a crucial importance.
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Exercise: translation
The way man can conciliate reconciles the imperatives of authority with his inner conscious voice is a permanente problem of human/mankind society. Its solution is more or less difficult regarding depending on the type of government and era but, any way, it could never totally disappeared. The present book has not the ambition to solve it, it just tries to study the reactions of the individuals placed at the center/centre of a conflict between his conscious conscience and the authority. Also this is also a work which uses science tries to explore by scientist way a human problem of a crucial importance.
"inner conscious voice" - I would say either "inner voice" or "conscience" instead.
"problem" - This is grammatically correct! You could also use "problem for" or "struggle" here.
"human/mankind society"- I would say either "human society" or "mankind." Or rearrange to be "human society/mankind." The last option is less clear.
"The present book" - I would use "this book" or "the book" if your audience knows which book you're talking about.
"has not the ambition" - Clunky. "Doesn't have" is better. Maybe "doesn't have enough ambition"? The cleanest way to phrase this is "This book's goal is not to solve the problem."
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