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Pajeon and Makgeolli A picture of my dinner yesterday. It was pretty classic. Pajeon (Korean scallion pancake; “pa” means scallion while “jeon” means Korean pancake.) and Makgeolli (Korean fermented rice wine)!⁣ ⁣ Pajeon is made with egg batter, wheat flour and scallions. Furthermore, you can add anything you want, but Koreans usually add either beef, kimchi, pork, squid or other seafood. Even though Pajeon is commonly translated as “Korean scallion pancake,” I feel like its texture is more similar to that of pizza.⁣ ⁣ When it comes to Makgeolli, it was my second time trying it. And I really enjoyed it. (The one I tried was mixed with corn powder, so it tasted different.) In my own words, Makgeolli tastes a bit like fermented Sprite mixed with milk and alcohol, but not in a weird way as it sounds. (Actually, a lot of Koreans do mix Makgeolli with Cider (a Korean version of Sprite). And we call it “Maksa,” combining their names.)⁣ ⁣ Arguably, Pajeon and Makgeolli is as popular as Fried Chicken and Beer in South Korea. So, why not try the combination when you come to South Korea? ⁣ ⁣ (Disclaimer: I didn’t make it. My mom made it. I have no idea how to make it. 😂 )⁣
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Pajeon and Makgeolli

(1)This is a picture of my dinner yesterday. It was a pretty classic two-course meal. Pajeon (Korean scallion pancake; “pa” means scallion while “jeon” means Korean pancake.) and Makgeolli (Korean fermented rice wine)!⁣
(2)Pajeon is made with egg batter, wheat flour and scallions. Furthermore, you can add anything you want, but Koreans usually add either beef, kimchi, pork, squid or other seafood. Even though Pajeon is commonly translated as “Korean scallion pancake,” I feel like its texture is similar to that of pizza.⁣
(3)It was my second time trying Makgeolli. I really enjoyed it. The one I tried was mixed with corn powder, so it tasted differently from the original recipe. Makgeolli tasted a bit like fermented Sprite mixed with milk and alcohol, but not in a weird way. A lot of Koreans mixed Makgeolli with Cider (a Korean version of Sprite), and we called it “Maksa,” combining their names altogether.⁣
(4)Arguably, Pajeon and Makgeolli are as popular as Fried Chicken and Beer in South Korea. How about trying them out on your next trip to South Korea? ⁣

(Disclaimer: I didn’t make the dinner. My mom made it. I have no idea how to make it. 😂 )⁣

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You have problems with verb tense on (3) paragraph
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10 เมษายน 2020
Pajeon and Makgeolli

<s>A</s> I took a picture of my dinner yesterday. It was pretty classic meal. Pajeon (A Korean scallion pancake; “pa” means scallion while “jeon” means Korean pancake.) and Makgeolli (Korean fermented rice wine)!⁣
Pajeon is made with egg batter, wheat flour and scallions. Furthermore, you can add anything you want, but Koreans usually add either beef, kimchi, pork, squid or other seafood. Even though Pajeon is commonly translated as “Korean scallion pancake,” I feel like its texture is more similar to that of pizza.⁣
When it comes to Makgeolli, it was the <s>my </s>second time <s>I had tried trying</s> it. And I really enjoyed it. (The one I tried was mixed with corn powder, so it tasted different.) In my own words, Makgeolli tastes a bit like fermented Sprite mixed with milk and alcohol, but not in the <s>a</s> weird way <s>as</s> it sounds. (Actually, a lot of Koreans do mix Makgeolli with Cider (a Korean version of Sprite). And we call it “Maksa,” combining their names.)⁣
Arguably, Pajeon and Makgeolli is as popular as fried chicken and beer in South Korea. So, why not try the combination when you come to South Korea? ⁣
(Disclaimer: I didn’t make it. My mom made it. I have no idea how to make it. 😂 )⁣
10 เมษายน 2020
I took a picture of my dinner yesterday, it was pretty classic. Pajeon (Korean scallion pancake; “pa” means scallion while “jeon” means Korean pancake) and Makgeolli (Korean fermented rice wine).

Pajeon is made from egg, butter, wheat flour, and scallions. <s>Furthermore,</s> You can add more ingredients <s>anything</s> as what you want, but Koreans usually add <s>either</s> beef, kimchi, pork, squid or <s>other </s>seafood. Even though Pajeon is commonly translated as “Korean scallion pancake", I feel like its texture is <s>more </s>similar <s>to that of</s> with pizza.⁣

When it turns to Makgeolli, it was actually my second time trying, <s>and</s> I really enjoyed it. The one I tried was mixed with the cornstarch <s>powder</s>, so it tasted a bit different. <s>In my own words, </s>Makgeolli tastes a bit like fermented Sprite which is mixed with the milk and alcohol, but not processed in a weird way <s>as it sounds</s>. Actually, a lot of Koreans mix Makgeolli with Cider (a Korean version of Sprite). That’s why we call it “Maksa,” due to combination of its names.

<s>Argueably,</s> Pajeon and Makgeolli are popular as a original fried chicken and Beer in South Korea. Therefore, why not to try combining those items to eat when coming to South Korea? ⁣

Disclaimer: I didn’t make it. My mom made it. I have no idea how to make it. 😂

10 เมษายน 2020
It is haha 😂
10 เมษายน 2020
Pajeon and makgeolli are so delicious 🤤
10 เมษายน 2020
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