TV in our life (translated from an article)
TV has become a part of our lives many years ago. Watching TV we know a lot of information. The most information coming from TV is certainly news. Thanks to the news we can be up to date of internal and external politics. However, not all programs bring benefits to us. Probably, opposide, they hinder our development, making us weak and inactive. Therefore, it is impossible to say that TV is 100% boon.
So, “the idiot box” with TV shows, does it do more good or harm? Giving a clear answer is impossible. What will happen if we will not turn on the TV? We will not know what happens in-country and in the world. We could, of course, to know the news via the internet, but not all people used to do it. This is especially true for people over 50 years.
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TV in our life (translated from an article)
TV has become a part of our lives many years ago. Watching TV we know a lot of information. The most information coming from TV is certainly news. Thanks to the news we can be up to date of internal and external politics. However, not all programs bring benefits to us. Probably, opposide, they hinder our development, making us weak and inactive. Therefore, it is impossible to say that TV is 100% boon.
So, “the idiot box” with TV shows, does it do more good or harm? Giving a clear answer is impossible. What will happen if we will not turn on the TV? We will not know what happens in-country and in the world. We could, of course, to know the news via the internet, but not all people used to do it. This is especially true for people over 50 years.
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V became a part of our live many years ago. We learn a lot watching TV. We learn from TV news most of all. Thanks to the news we can be up to date on local, national and international politics. Not all programs however, are beneficial and some are actually the opposite when they give us bad information. Therefore you have to choose between good and bad news.
It's hard to say if the "idiot box" does more good or harm. What would happen if we didn't turn on the TV? Would we have no idea as to what is going on? Of course we could rely on the internet but not everyone has access to it or knows how to use it. This is especially true for people over 50.
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Very good over all. I tried to make some expressions more normal and took out some points you tried to make twice. I have to say I"m 67 and use the internet a lot more than TV for the news. I read a variety of papers and websites in the U.S. and Europe and prefer sites who write "long form" journalism.
Keep up the great work!
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