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Hi everyone! Hi everyone. How are you? I’m Cecilia and I live in a little town in north Italy. I love English, especially American English and my dream is learn it like a native. I studied british English at school for 5 years but I realize that the teachers were not natives language and so they teach English very bad and the pronunciation was totally wrong. So unfortunately I know an elementary English, I know a little terms and words and I have very difficult to talk with someone. I would like find an American girl for talk in English, and maybe make friendship. And a day I wish visit California. Since when I was a child I dreamed to go in California. And after California I would like to visit a lot of places of America. Sorry for my mistakes, I know, my English is very bad. ☹️

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Hi everyone!

Hi everyone. How are you?

I’m Cecilia and I live in a little town in northern Italy.

I love English, especially American English and my dream is learn it like a native.

I studied British English at school for 5 years but I realized that the teachers were not natives speakers language and so they teach taught English very bad poorly and the pronunciation was totally wrong.

So unfortunately I only know an elementary English, I know a little few terms and words and I have very difficulty to talk with people someone.

I would like find an American girl for to speak talk in English with, and maybe become make friends with.

And some day I wish visit California. Since when I was a child I dreamed to go in to California.
And after California I would like to visit a lot of places of in America.

Sorry for my mistakes, I know, my English is very bad. ☹️

Keep practicing. Well done.
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Hi everyone!

Hi everyone. How are you?

I’m Cecilia and I live in a little town in north Italy.

I love English, especially American English and my dream is to learn it like a native.

I studied British English at school for 5 years but I realized that the teachers were not native speakers language and so they teach taught English very badly and the pronunciation was totally wrong.

So, unfortunately I only know an elementary English. I know a little few terms and words and I have find it very difficult to talk with someone to anyone/have a conversation.

I would like to find an American girl for to talk to in English, and maybe to make a new friendship.

And a One day, I wish to visit California. Since when I was a child, I have dreamed to go in of going to California.
And After California, I would like to visit a lot of places of in America.

Sorry for my mistakes, I know my English is very bad. ☹️
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Hi, everyone!

Hi, everyone. How are you?

I’m Cecilia and I live in a little town in north Italy.

I love English, especially American English, and my dream is to learn it like a native. (*If you have "verb + verb," then the second "verb" needs to be an "infinitive verb". An 'infinitive verb' is just the basic form of a verb--exactly how you would see it in a dictionary. It doesn't have "-ing" or "-ed" at the end, etc. Therefore, your grammar would be "verb + infinitive verb" or "verb + to + basic verb"
From your example, "...my dream IS + TO LEARN it...")

I have studied British English (at school) for 5 years but I realized that the teachers were not native speakers, language and so they teach taught English very bad poorly and the pronunciations were totally wrong.
(*I would say, "I HAVE studied..." because you didn't mention which day or year you started learning it. However, if you were specific or were to say the day/month/year, then you don't need "have." I would also capitalize the "b". Use "B" instead of "b". Names are always capitalized and the name of the language is 'British English.')

So, unfortunately, I only know an elementary English. I know a little few terms and words, and I have very difficult to talk with someone difficulties talking with people.

I would like to find an American girl for to talk in English with, and maybe make have friendship with. (*Remember "verb + to + verb"--> "...like + to + find...")

And a Also, one day I wish to visit California. Ever since when I was a child, I have dreamed to go in of going to California. And After California, I would like to visit a lot of places of in America. (*Remember, "verb + infinitive verb"---> "...wish + to visit". Also, if you're not going to mention the specific day, then you should use "have"---> "I have dreamed of...")

Sorry for my mistakes. I know my English is very bad. ☹️

***Your English is very good! Only small mistakes. Great job! ^-^
There're so many ways to write it, as you can see from Fiona and Tom C.
Also, this isn't a formal writing, so it doesn't matter how you write it. :)
If you have any questions about my comments, then please let me know. ^-^
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Hello! Your English reads very well here - you are better than you think, maybe? I had no trouble understanding you! :) I was born in California and have a lot of family still there. It's beautiful!

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