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Please check my grammar in video. "my trip to Korea" https://youtu.be/WQpQS4SBT9s Please correct me If there is any grammar mistake or unnatural word choice. It will be even more helpful if you also give me some advice on pronunciation and intonation. In detail note, there is sentence.

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Hello.
I'm Miu.
Please check my grammar and give me some advice.
I will talk about my trip to Korea for my friend's wedding reception one years ago.
My friend is Korean and her husband is also Korean so they had their wedding party in Korea.
When I searched for "Korean wedding party", I found out that there are so many differences between a Korean wedding party and a Japanese one.
But they mixed Korean method and Japanese combined both the Korean and the Japanese methods because they had been lived in Japan for almost 10 years.
She wore a wedding dress and a chimachogori, a is Korean traditional dress.
She wearing wedding dress is very beautiful She looked very beautiful in her wedding dress and the chimadhogori was very cute.
After that, I had dinner with them.
Then, I drank Makkori, a is Korean traditional Korean alcohol.
It's taste good and it's first time for me. It was the first time I had tried it and it tasted good.
Next time, I want to go to Korea for sightseeing.
I was going to go to Korea in April in this year, but the Corona Virus prevented this.
After Corona is over, I will go to Korea.
Thank you for your listening.

いい話しですね。二つのこたが分からないですけど。
1."it's first time for me"。。。そんなことを聞けません、ごめんなさい。
2.Virus... 日本語で「ウイルス」と書いて英語で「ヴァイルス」と言います。

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