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Please help me to check my essay Hello this is my first time to use this app, I found this app in ZhiHu ,which is a Chinese website focus on solving various problems, ZhiHu looks like Quora, although I haven't try Quora because of vpn restrictions. In the future I think I will use this software more often to learn English and make friends. It is really a perfect app for people who want to learn a new language right? Hope someone warm-hearted look at me ! Please
22 มิ.ย. 2020 เวลา 5:57
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Please help me <s>to check </s> <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">revise</s> my essay

Hello this is my first time to use using this app<s>, </s><s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">.</s>I found this app through <s>in </s>ZhiHu ,which is a Chinese website that focuses <s>focus</s> on solving various problems.
ZhiHu looks like Quora, although I haven't <s>try</s> tried Quora because of VPN restrictions.
In the future, I think I will use this software more often to learn English and make friends.
It is really a perfect app for people who want to learn a new language, right?
I h<s>H</s>ope someone warm-hearted <s>look at me ! Please </s>will take a look at what I've written. Thank you
22 มิถุนายน 2020
Please help me to check my essay

Hello this is my first time to use this app, I found this app in ZhiHu ,which is a Chinese website focus on solving various problems<s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">,</s>. ZhiHu looks like Quora, although I haven't tried Quora because of VPN restrictions. In the future, I think I will use this software more often to learn English and make friends. It really <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">a</s> is the perfect app for people/those who want to learn a new language, right? I hope someone warm-hearted look at me ! Please

Please help correct my essay.

Hello! This is my first time using iTalki. I found this app through ZhiHu, which is a Chinese website focused on solving various problems. ZhiHu is the Chinese equivalent to Quora, though I haven't tried Quora due to online censorship. In the future, I think I will use this software more often to learn English and make new friends. It is a perfect app for people who want to learn a new language, right? I hope someone warm-hearted/benevolent will verify my essay.

Thank you.

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Be sure to use periods when you complete a thought. Structured sentences are incredibly important to being understood. This is a good start. At the end, when you say look at me, you're probably translating a Chinese idiom into English. Idioms cannot be translated between languages - but these are advanced topics so don't worry too much about them yet. The most important thing is when to use a period . or a comma , to convey your thoughts.
22 มิถุนายน 2020
Please help me to check my essay Hello this is my first time to use this app, I found this app in ZhiHu ,which is a Chinese website focus on solving various problems, ZhiHu looks like Quora, although I haven't try Quora because of vpn restrictions. In the future I think I will use this software more often to learn English and make friends. It is really a perfect app for people who want to learn a new language right? Hope someone warm-hearted look at me ! Please
In March 2018, the use of unapproved VPN services was banned in China, as they can be used by to circumvent the Great Firewall.
7 มิถุนายน 2021
Please help me to check my essay

Hello this is my first time to use this app, I found this app in ZhiHu ,which is a Chinese website focus on solving various problems, ZhiHu looks like Quora, although I haven't try Quora because of vpn restrictions. In the future I think I will use this software more often to learn English and make friends. It is really a perfect app for people who want to learn a new language right? Hope someone warm-hearted look at me ! Please
22 มิถุนายน 2020
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