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Review for film "the fifth element" I would like to tell about the most exciting story which was filmed in the last century, but even now a lot of people love and watch this film again and again, because it includes a love story, thriller and comedy. The main actors are Bruce Willis and Milla Jovovich. They are playing convincing roles in this film which gives you gripping effect, you can't guess what will happend for the next moment. This story about a woman, Lilu, who is from another planet, but for a long time she had been "sleeping". Her destination is to protect the Earth, so when its under the treat of death, she must wake up and realise her purpose. In my opinion, "the fifth element" is the best film what I've ever seen because of its twisted plot. It's surprised how it can be combined with three genres like comedy, romantic story and thriller. The film is suitable for people who over sixteen years old, because it has some violent scenes. Also, I would recommend it if you don't know what genre you want to watch.

23 ส.ค. 2020 เวลา 7:36

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Review for the film "the fifth element"

I would like to tell you about the most exciting story which was filmed in the last century. Even now a lot of people love and watch this film again and again. This is because it includes a love story, thriller and comedy.

The main actors are Bruce Willis and Milla Jovovich. They play convincing roles in this film which makes it gripping and you can't guess what will happen from one moment to the next. The story is about a woman, Lilu, who is from another planet, but for a long time she has been "sleeping". Her destination is to protect the Earth, so when it's under the threat she must wake up and realise her purpose.

In my opinion, "the fifth element" is the best film that I've ever seen because of the plot twists. It's surprising how it can combine the three genres of comedy, romance and thriller.

The film is suitable for people over the age of sixteen years old, because it has some violent scenes. Also, I would recommend it if you don't know what genre you want to watch.

23 สิงหาคม 2020

Review for the film "The Fifth Element"

I would like to tell you about the most exciting story <s>which</s> <s>was</s> to be filmed in the last century. <s>but</s> Even now a lot of people love and watch this film again and again, because it includes a love story, <s>thriller</s> action(1) and comedy.

The main actors are Bruce Willis and Milla Jovovich. They are playing convincing roles in this film which has <s>gives you</s> a gripping effect on you(2), you can't guess what will happen<s style="background-color: rgb(250, 204, 204);">d</s> <s>for</s> in the next moment (or just "you can't guess what will happen next"). This/The story is about a woman, Lilu, who is from another planet, but for a long time she had been "sleeping". Her destiny <s>destination</s> is to protect the Earth. So, when its under the threat of annihilation <s>death</s>(3), she must wake up and realise her purpose.

In my opinion, "The Fifth Element" is the best film <s>what</s> that I've ever seen, because of its twisted plot. It's surprising how it can <s>be</s> combine<s style="background-color: rgb(250, 204, 204);">d</s> <s>with</s> three genres like comedy, romance and thriller.

The film is suitable for people who are over sixteen years old, because it has some violent scenes. Also, I would recommend it if you don't know what genre you want to watch.

(1) A film can be "a thriller", but you can't use it to describe it. Either the film includes action, or thrills.

(2) The film can have a gripping effect, or you can be gripped by the film. It can't give you a gripping effect.

(3) We wouldn't say that the Earth is under the threat of death. Death is used for people, animals, plants, etc. The Earth is under threat of annihilation, destruction, Armageddon, etc.

This is really well written, well done! Just a couple of points:

- Film titles are usually capitalised on the first letter of key words. For example "The Taming of the Shrew". Note that "of" and "the" aren't capitalized.

- It's good to put a blank line between paragraphs. It really helps the reader to parse large blocks of text. It makes it more accessible and easier to read. Large blocks of text put a lot of people off when choosing whether to correct a piece so it's worth doing :)

Good writing about a great film. Chris Rock's character is amazing. I might have to watch it again tonight!

23 สิงหาคม 2020

May I correct it, Kseniya?

Review for film "the fifth element"

I would like to tell you about the most exciting story which was filmed in the last century, but even now a lot of people love and watch this film again and again because it includes a love story, thriller and comedy.

The main actors are Bruce Willis and Milla Jovovich. They are playing convincing roles in this film which give you gripping effect, you can't guess what will happen for the next moment. This story is about a woman, Lilu, who is from another planet, but for a long time she had been "sleeping". Her destination is to protect the Earth, so when it is under the threat of death, she must wake up and realise her purpose.

In my opinion, "the fifth element" is the best film <s>what</s> I've ever seen because of its twisted plot. It's surprising how it can be combined with three genres, like comedy, romantic story, and thriller.

The film is suitable for people who are over sixteen years old because it has some violent scenes. Also, I would recommend it if you don't know what genre you want to watch.

You've done well. Great review! 😊🙏🏼

23 สิงหาคม 2020

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