Rome, A Nice City I Like good city I like!

We three girls go to visit toured Italy.  ,hehe, On the first day we went sight seeing of  to see many history site in historical Rome.  It is beautiful and amazing! The most important thing is that we don't do not have any tour guide but almost we managed to visited almost all of the famous sites,great,right?Of course, the people in Rome is so  so so nice and gentle.  that's right!So just enjoy all the days in Italy!haha,Happy Xmas!!!!! Had a great time in Italy.  Happy Christmas.

Don't put all those silly "hees hees" etc of that nature peppering all over your essay.  At the same time, I noticed you that you are not following my advice about your punctuation spacing rules.  This will be my last correction if you don't heed my counsel.  孺子不可教為何費時教之.