First notebook entry: Introducing myself
Hi,nice to talk with you on internet .Though i don't kown who you are,i want to introduce myself first(Is it all right?).My english name is kiki,I come from China and i'm an adult,I'm still a student in a university .I like reading and singing.I want to learn english well,so i need some help from you .Of cause ,if you want to learn chinese i will be happy to help you.Thank you for seeing my passage and hope be friends with you!
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself
Hi, nice to talk with meet you here, on italki. internet .Though, I don't kown know who you are, I want to introduce myself first. (Is it all right?) My English name is Kiki. I come from China and i'm I am an adult. I'm I am still a student in a university. I like reading and singing. I want to learn English well, so I need some help from you. Of course, cause if you want to learn Chinese, I will be happy to help you. Thank you for seeing my passage and I hope to be friends with you!
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Suggestions: 1. Leave a space after punctuation mark and not before it. 2. "I" should always be capital.
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