would you correct it plz?
I want to indicate in which sub-areas (among 3 general areas) I'm interested more. I wrote these sentences:
Among various X sub-areas, I have already worked on X1 and I'm interested in X2 and X3, too. In Y area, Y1 and Y2 attracts me more than the others. The other fields I would like to choose for researching are Z, Z' and Z".
Is it grammatically correct?
I'm completing an application form in which I have chosen 3 general areas. The next part of application asks me to indicate in which sub-areas I am more interested. I don't know if a brief paragraph (like what I wrote above) is enough or not. There is no limitation on minimum and maximum of paragraph. Do you have any experience or comments?
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It's difficult to know which prepositions to use and the best sentence formation without knowing what exactly the letters you wrote stand for.
Among various X sub-areas, I have already worked on X1 and I'm interested in X2 and X3, too. In Y area, Y1 and Y2 attracts me more than the others. The other fields I would like to choose for researching are Z, Z' and Z".
I would write:
Of the various sub-areas of X (or possibly X sub-areas, depending entirely upon what X is), I have already worked in X1 (or possibly "on," depending entirely upon what X1 is) and I'm interested in working in/on X2 and X3. In the area of Y (or possibly Y area, depending entirely upon what Y is), Y1 and Y2 attract me more than the others.
The last sentence seems ok.
Sorry, I can't give any feedback about the kind of answer they want in your application.
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