Vacation's Over

My winter vacation is finally over. Everything has to      go    back to normal. Classes, canteen, library and dorm basically make my      college life what it is.     Maybe not only me, but other students will lead the same life.

Strictly, it should be 'I' not 'me,' as it is the subject, but 'me' is common. Using the word'maybe' implies that it is not definite, so I think you don't need it.

'Not only I, but other students will lead the same life.'

Every minute, every day, everybody idliving in the framework that our society has created.

Either 'everybody is,' or 'all people are.'

Though there are people who try hard to break the rules, they still have to face the reality. And yet, they can do nothing to change it.

You don't need 'and yet.' You have already shown that they can do nothing:    'they still have to face the reality. They can do nothing to change it.'

Sarcastic enough, I am one of them.

'Sarcastic is definitely the wrong word here. It can apply only to what people say or write; a situation can be ironic, but not sarcastic.

'Ironically enough' means it is not what you expect, or 'sadly enough' might be right.

I'm glad I have recently figured out what I want to do.

The figuring out is recent, not the doing.

It's not a big big goal at all, but at least    it lets    me know there's hope ahead. It may make me who I am and tell me what kind of life I should lead.

'In front' and 'ahead' mean the same thing if you are talking about distance, but with time you use 'ahead.

The end of the vacation is just another beginning for me.

In Britain, although we know and understand the word'vacation,' we are much more likely to use 'holiday.' In America, vacation is correct.

 I hope my corrections don't discourage you. The mistakes are very small, your English is good and easy to understand.