A Terrible Haircut
I got had my hair cut today. The barber hairstylist1 gave me a very very cut it too short haircut. 2 Now I look like a boy. It's so boring and I don't want to meet anyone.
However, I must go to a wedding reception tomorrow. And I had expected that I can meet a boy there, then and we can start to weave a love story. , now what I Alas, all hope is gone.
God. Pls Please send me a boy who likes short hair. Say tomorrow! , likes me tomorrow.
Thanks!
1. A barber is one who cuts men's hair. A hairstylist is for women. However, today it is used for both sexes and "barber" seems dated and old fashioned because it lacks glamour.
2. Nothing wrong with sentence. It just that you have used "haircut" too often and so it sounds boring in English. Need to vary your sentence structure.
A terrible haircut
I got my hair cut today. The barber gave me a very, very short haircut. I look like a boy. It's so boring I don't want to meet anyone.
However, I must go to a wedding reception tomorrow. And I expected that I can meet a boy there, then we can start a love story , now what I hope is gone.
God. please send me a boy who likes short hair , likes me tomorrow.
Thanks!
A terrible haircut
I got my hair cut today, the barber gave me a very very short haircut. I look like a boy, It's so boring, I don't want to meet anyone.
However, I must go to a wedding reception tomorrow. And I expected (1) and I had(2) hoped that I can might(3) meet a boy there, then we can could start a love story, now what I my hope ishas(4) gone.
God. pls send me a boy who likes short hair, likes me tomorrow.
Thanks!
Notes
(1) starting a sentence with 'And' and, but, or are conjunctions, and <em>usually </em>join two clauses together in a single sentence, often with a comma in between - so ', and' and not '. And'
(2) had hoped - pluperfect tense - completed...
(3) might not can - can denotes ability, may/might denotes possibility (uncertainty) ... the second can may be might or
(4) consistent past tense has gone (this is not so simple! the tenses here are difficult because you talk about something that might have happened in the future but now cannot...)
