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a letter Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Kevin Stone, a friend of Jack Pullman who is applying for a job of the hotel. Jack is a friend of my brother. The first time we met each other was in a football game. Afterwards, we played football together frequently, thus, he became a really good friend of mine. Jack Pullman had been working as a manager of Summer Palace for almost three years. Later, he worked for Four Seasons Hotel, one of the best hotels in Newcastle. But unfortunately, his mother had got a sick last year, as a result, he had resigned and taken few months to look after her. Jack is one of the most reliable persons I've ever seen before, and he is a competant manager with patience and a sense of responsibility. And obviously, he does has rich experience that is what the hotel need. At last, I think that Jack Pullman is right one for the hotel, you wouldn't regret if you chose him. Yours sincerely, Kevin Stone

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a letter

Dear Sir or Madam,

My name is Kevin Stone, a friend of Jack Pullman who is applying for a job at the hotel.

Jack was a friend of my brother. The first time we met each other was at a football game. Afterwards, we played football together often and he became a very good friend of mine as well.

Jack Pullman worked as a manager of Summer Palace for almost three years and later worked for the Four Seasons Hotel, one of the best hotels in Newcastle. Unfortunately, his mother fell ill last year, and as a result he resigned and took a few months to look after her.

Jack is one of the most reliable people I've ever met.  He is a competent manager with patience and a sense of responsibility, as well as the extensive experience that a hotel needs. In short, I think that Jack Pullman is the right choice for the hotel, one that would not be regretted.

Yours sincerely,

Kevin Stone

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谢谢,这个是我的第一个原创,之前的都是模仿的。
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重点很突出,没有废话,字数正好。
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恭喜你,这份心看上去很高手的说。
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Overall, I think the letter was very well-written, I just made a few corrections and a few changes to make it sound a bit more natural. Nice job :)

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