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San Isidro - local fairly day Hi Everybody. Today in Madrid is celebrated San Isidro. San Isidro became from to be farmworker (i don't know if this word is correct, because i want to mean a person who works in the field collecting stuff) to be a saint. In Madrid he has a church made in honour of his name. All of 15th of May it is celebrated a religious meeting in which the saint statue is showed during a short period of time. In this time, some of his followers try to touch it for receiving good luck. I don't believe in this things, but it's very interesting how the people is able to change when the religious believings come into scene. Anyway... there is, too, bull fightings and other celebrations. Yesterday, in Gran Via (one of the most importants streets in Madrid) was a concert with a amount of rock/pop groups from 90's. They're now more wrinkled than in 90's ;) but their music rules yet. Thank you in advance for your corrections. I hope you've like it. Bye, Ricky.

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OOooooooOOOOps! I missed this the first time through.


On the 15th of May there is a religious celebration in which the saint's statue is SHOWN during a short period of time. During this time, some of his followers try to touch it for receiving good luck. I don't believe in these things, but it's very interesting how people are able to change when the religious believings come to their minds (or are in their minds).

That last line is still problematic. :/

Just like in college, you get to write everything three times.  ;)
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San Isidro - local fairly day (???)

Hi, everybody.

Today in Madrid is celebrated San Isidro day is celebrated . San Isidro became from to be went from being a farmworker to be a saint.

In Madrid he has a church made in honour of his name (better: there is church named in his honor). All of  On the 15th of May it is celebrated a religious meeting (???) is held (I am not sure what happens --- is it really a meeting? A service? A parade?) in which the saint's statue is showed during a short period of time. During this time, some of his followers try to touch it for receiving good luck. I don't believe in these things, but it's very interesting how the people are able to change when the religious believings (???) come onto the scene.

Anyway... there is, too, are also bull fightings (fights) and other celebrations. Yesterday, in Gran Via (one of the most importants streets in Madrid) there was a concert with a amount lot of rock/pop groups from the 90's. They're now more wrinkled than in the 90's (or more wrinkled than back then, so it's not redundant), but their music rules yet.

[Nice job, Ricky. The end was really cute! Can you fix the parts with question marks?)
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(Ok. I've fixed all of it)

San Isidro - local fairly day

Hi Everybody.

Today in Madrid San Isidro day is celebrated. San went from being a farmworker to a saint.

In Madrid there is a church named in his honour. On the 15th of May there is a religious celebration in which the saint's statue is showed during a short period of time. During this time, some of his followers try to touch it for receiving good luck. I don't believe in this things, but it's very interesting how people are able to change when the religious believings come to their minds (or are in their minds).

Anyway... there are bull fights and other celebrations. Yesterday, in Gran Via (one of the most importants streets in Madrid) there was a concert with a lot of rock/pop groups from the 90's. They're now more wrinkled than back then, ;) but their music rules yet.



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