First notebook entry: Introducing myself English is a world language and more and more people begin to use English in Shanghai. Its very importand for me to have good English. I would like to have a g

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself English is a world language and more and more people begin to use English in Shanghai. Its very importand for me to have good English. I would like to have a good future and good work, good English is must! So can you help me!

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

English is a world language and more and more people begin to use English in Shanghai. Its very importanｔ for me to have a good English.(to be good at English/to speak English well) I would like to have a good future and a good job, so/therefore a (being) good (at) English is must!
So can you help me!

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

English is a world language and more and more people begin to use English in Shanghai. Its very ~~importand~~ important for me to have good English. I would like to have a good future and good ~~work~~ job, good English is a must!
So can you help me!

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