writing task 1 in IELTS test
The table provides the information about the consumer durables (telephone, refrigerator, etc.) owned in Britain from 1972 to 1983.
Generally speaking, the trends of all durable machines increased, such as television, vacuum cleaner, refrigerator and washing machine.
In particular, telephone had the highest rise from 42% in 1972 to 77% in 1983. However, central heating also grew with a noticeable number, which was 34%.
Despite of appearing later than others, in 1983, video reached 18% when it was sold the first time and dishwasher had 5% over 5 years.
Finally, all of above consumer durables were used more and more each year, especially telephone and central heating.
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Writing Task 1 in IELTS test
The table provides the information about the consumer durables (telephones, refrigerators, etc.) owned in Britain from 1972 to 1983.
Generally speaking, the trends showed increases of for all consumer durables machines increased, such as televisions, vacuum cleaners, refrigerators, and washing machines.
In particular, telephones had the highest rise, from 42% in 1972 to 77% in 1983. However, central heating also grew with a noticeable number at a significant rate, which was 34%.
Despite of appearing later than the others, in 1983, video recorders reached 18% when after it was initially being sold in 1983 the first time, and dishwashers had 5% over 5 years.
Finally, all of the above consumer durables were used more and more each year, especially telephones and central heating.
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