Self introduction

My name is Luhuan. I'm from China. I hope I can be a little traveler. I like music very much and like learning English. China has a lot of history that is shocking. I have a lovely son. See, he smiled at me. I am very satisfied.

It is the history that is shocking, not the Chinese people. The history was made by people who are long gone. Don't forget to put a space between sentences.

Self Introduction

My name is Luhuan. I'm from China. I hope I can be a little traveler. I like music very much like learning English. China has a lot of long history that makes us shocking. I have a lovely son, see, he smiled at me. I am very satisfied.