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Today
Today I was very happy. Chen had an operation about ten days ago.So we had not met for a long time.And during this time I felt very lonely.I did miss him very much.
We finally met on this day.We went to see a film. Before the film,he bought two donkey fires for me. (I don't know what a donkey frie is, but it sounds funny!) They were very delicious.He also wanted to eat one but i didn't give him because I was hungry ahaha.
Then we saw that film. It was boring. I don't like this kind of movie but we had no choice.So I slept at his shoulder all the time during the film.Although it the movie really didn't attract me, i felt very comfortable because he was with me.But because his illness, we couldn't kiss each other. So he just asked me to kiss his cheek. What a pity for us!
After the film, we went to eat some snake (Snake?! Haha, I try not to eat things that can eat me! 蛇? 我不敢吃能吃我的饭菜!). I drank a glass of coco.But he said that it tasted badly .Then we walked along the street.We bought a roast corn.He snatched at it with me (Maybe you want to say "he tried to snatch it from me"). It was interesting,because he had just power, but He still couldn't run fast. So i won. Haha.
Then the sky turning dark,he went to his grandma and I returned my home.Today is a wonderfull day. If we can meet tomorrow, it will be better .He said maybe i could visit him tomorrow and I hope so.
This artical is too long so it must has many mistakes. (Says who? 谁说有无措? 对俺来看很顺利, 佩服。)Please forgive me.
Today I’m very happy because I met with Chen my boyfriend. We haven’t met for a long time. He had an operation about ten days ago. When he was in hospital, I was really missing him and feeling lonely.
We went to watch a movie. Before the movie start, he bought two donkey fires for me. They were very delicious. He wanted to eat one but I didn't give him because I was very hungry. It might not enough for me if I gave him one. hahaha
The movie was boring. I really didn't like this movie but we had no choice. So, I decided sleeping at his shoulder all the time during the movie. Although it really didn't attract me, I felt very comfortable because he was with me, but because of his illness, we couldn't kiss each other. He just asked me to kiss his cheek. What a pity for us!
After the movie, we went to eat some snakes. I drank a glass of Chocolate but he told me that it tasted badly. Then we walked along the street. We bought a roast corn. He snatched at it with me and it was interesting, because he was in recovery and he couldn't run fast so I won.
Then the sky turned dark, he went to his grandma’s house and I returned my home. Today is a wonderful day. I hope we can meet again tomorrow. He told me maybe I could visit him tomorrow and I hope so.
This article is too long so it may have some mistakes. Please forgive me.
Today
Today I was very happy. Chen had an operation about ten days ago.So we had not met for a long time.And during this time I felt very lonely.I did miss him very much.
We finally met on this day.We went to see a film. Before the film,he bought two donkey fires for me. They were very delicious.He also wanted to eat one but i didn't give him because I was hungry ahaha.
Then we saw that film. It was boring. I don't like this kind of movie but we had no choice.So I slept at his shoulder all the time during the film.Although the film really didn't attract me, i felt very comfortable because he was with me.But because his illness, we couldn't kiss each other. So he just asked me to kiss his cheek. What a pity for us!
After the film, we went to eat some snack. I drank a glass of coco.But he said that it tasted badly.Then we walked along the street.We bought a roast corn.He snatched at it with me. It was interesting,because he had just power.He still couldn't run fast. So i won. Haha.
Then the sky turning dark,he went to his grandma and I returned my home.Today is a wonderfull day. If we can meet tomorrow, it will be better .He said maybe i could visit him tomorrow and I hope so.
This artical is too long so it must has many mistakes.Please forgive me.
Today
Today I was very happy. Chen had an operation about ten days ago.So we had not met for a long time.And during this time I felt very lonely.I did miss him very much.
We finally met on this day.We went to see a film. Before the film,he bought two donkey fires for me. They were very delicious.He also wanted to eat one but i didn't give him because I was hungry ahaha.
Then we saw that film. It was boring. I don't like this kind of movie but we had no choice.So I slept at his shoulder all the time during the film.Although the film really didn't attract me, i felt very comfortable because he was with me.But because his illness, we couldn't kiss each other. So he just asked me to kiss his cheek. What a pity for us!
After the film, we went to eat some snake. I drank a glass of coco.But he said that it tasted badly.Then we walked along the street.We bought a roast corn.He snatched at it with me. It was interesting,because he had just power.He still couldn't run fast. So i won. Haha.
Then the sky turning dark,he went to his grandma and I returned my home.Today is a wonderfull day. If we can meet tomorrow, it will be better .He said maybe i could visit him tomorrow and I hope so.
This artical is too long so it must has many mistakes.Please forgive me.
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