Eating at home or outside.

More and more people eat outside instead of cooking at home while life is improving. Despite the fact they are released from kitchens, they have more time to work or to enjoy their life. But their health becomes a serious issue. Life is threathened by food safety, environment, and diseases. We'd rather eat at home than eat outside because it is safer, also, it can save more money.

I think these corrections are a little more sound.

Eating at home or outside dining out.

As people's lives start to imporove, more and more people eat outside out instead of cooking at home while life is improving. Despite Because they are released from the kitchen, they have more time to work or to enjoy their life  But , yet their heathy health becomes a serious issue. Live Their lives are threathened by food safe safety, environment and diseases. We'd rather eat at home than eat outside out because it is safety safer, also, and it can also save us more money.

Eating at home or outside.

More and more people eat outside instead of cooking at home while life is improving. Despite they are released from kitchens, they have more time to work or to enjoy their life. But their heathy becomes a serious issue. Live is threatened by food safe, environment and diseases. We'd rather eat at home than eat outside because it is safety, also, it can save more money.

@everything is good, only "threatened", not "threathened" but this is very small mistake :)