konijiwa

wadashiwa nihongo o benkyoshideimasu.

wadashi wa New York ni sundeimasu. boku no shigodoba wa ima New York. demo, lai nien tokyo ni i ki mas. soshide nihongo o kakalimasu.

doso yoloshiku!

After Correction as follows

Konnichiwa

watashi wa nihongo wo benkyou shiteimasu. Watashi no shokuba wa ima New York desu demo rainen Tokyo ni ikimasu sorede nihongo wo hajime mashita

dozo yoroshiku

comments

Pls kindly understand If start with Watashi , please use same word in the sentence

also La is not commonly use japanese sound system please kindly use RA, Finally you write "kakaru" I take means start in this connection "Hajime" is right word to use. Your Japanese is good therefore keep study hard.