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My November First Day is A Jogging Day!
November 1st, 2012
It’s November the first ! Today, I started a resolution (and really hope I can do it as habit, a new and good habit). It was 2.45 p.m when rain fell, quiet hard and I felt worried that I had to cancel my plan today. It’s a jogging day, I said to myself. Either I can jog in the morning or the afternoon, at least once a day. For today, I planned to jog in afternoon. But it was a rainy day in afternoon then. Fortunately, at 3.30 pm the rain stopped. I dressed up and started to jog at 4.00 pm . I’m very grateful for the rain, it made the weather so cool and very comfortable for jogging. Praise to Allah !.... :D
I remembered that when I was at (or in) junior high school, every Saturday morning I would come to the city sport hall (GOR—Gelanggang Olahraga) in Padang, my home town. Many people played sport (or sports) there: jogging, bycycling, practicing taekwondo, senam (what is ‘senam’ in English? Aerobic?) (It's aerobics) and many more. I used to jog with my bestfriend, Jeanne. We even went to tepi laut (the sea side? Yes), it’s quite far about 13 miles perhaps, maybe more. Yup, I could walk 13 miles more than 9 years ago. But now, it’s almost impossible for me, it’s really far exactly, hahaha....
I took some pictures while I jogged. I realized that there are many beautiful spots to take pictures in my college. Perhaps I can attach some of them here. I think around the library center building is one of my favorite spots. I took its picture across the lake, trying to get the whole view of the library building. I also took a picture of Rektorat Building and trees. It’s beautiful, isn’t it?
Good work !! Your mistakes are all because of the differences between English and bahasa Indonesia: not knowing when to use articles (a and the) because there are none in Indo, writing plurals as singulars (because Indo rarely uses plurals), and tenses because Indo ones are so much simpler.
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