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Dream and Passion Heart pumps faster and faster when I saw his face. I know he is not real in my suck life, but he is my passion to against the world. Sometimes, I felt his always by my side. He is taking care of me, smiling at me, and giving the strength when I lost my confident. Now, he wants to come in my country but the fate isn't my wishes. Tears that I'm trying to hide pouring in my eyes, although I am smiling but the wound is painful. I know, I am just the one of the thousand fans of him yet my feeling says "he is mine." My only dream is seeing him closely and says I'm happy be your loyal fans, thanks you come to bring a new motivation for me. I am taking deep breath, and says in front his picture, "you're my dream and passion along my world."

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Dream and Passion

 

My heart pumped faster and faster when I saw his face. I know he is not real in my suck mundane/bland/boring life, but he is my passion to against strive in the this world.


Sometimes, I felt his feel that he is always by my side; He is taking care of me, smiling at me, and giving me the strength when I lost my confidence left me confident. Now, he wants to come in to my country but the fate isn't is not in my cards wishes. Tears that I'm am trying to hide, are pouring in from my eyes. , although Even though I am smiling but pain is in my heart the wound is painful.
I know, I am just the one of the his thousand fans of him yet my feeling says heart tells me that "he is mine."

My only dream is to seeing him up closely and says I'm happy be contented to be his your loyal fan.s, Thanks you come to bring a new motivation for inspiring and giving me a dream. 


I am Taking a deep breath, and says in front I say to him in his picture, "You're my dream and passion along in my world."

We all went through this sort of phases in all of our lives.  I am no exception.  As a kid, mine was a character named Illya Kuryakin.  You should thank Les Lestari for alerting me to correct your essay :)

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