Introducing myself hello,every one ,I will introduce myself .My name is David ,I am learning English ,because I want to make friends from your country .My native language is chinese ,and I grew up in

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David

Introducing myself hello,every one ,I will introduce myself .My name is David ,I am learning English ,because I want to make friends from your country .My native language is chinese ,and I grew up in china ,now I live in shanghai .I enjoy I like listening to music, playing badminton, tourism ,thanks

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Hello! Just 2 notes: 1 Using "will" maybe is OK but much better to use "going to" because this introduction is plan, not instant decision. I'm going to introduce myself. 2 If you use "I enjoy" that's enough, you don't need "I like" after that. I enjoy skiing.

Introducing myself

Hello every one. I will introduce myself. My name is David and I am learning English because I want to make friends from your country. My native language is Chinese and I grew up in China. Now I live in Shanghai. I enjoy I like listening to music, playing badminton and tourism. Thank.

[Not bad. Put a space after punctuation, such as a period, not before it. Watch your capitalization.]

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