My goals for the new year!!! What do you have?

Hello! I'm sorry for my later second notebook!

I'd like to talk about my goals to new year 2013 and you could comment me which are yours. It could be interesting! Don't think?

Well, it's already known that I want to learn english language!!!For that reason I signed italki.com but my main goal is to approve or pass the exam called "First Certificate" or "B1 level" and with this web I try to remember grammar and vocabulary before enter in an official academy. In the same context, I want to pass the intermediate level exam of my community language because isn't spanish, it's the "valenciano". I am from Valencia city (Spain) and its language is similar to "catalán" (from Barcelona)...I'm not sure you know that I want to mean...hahaha! because if you want to get public employment oppositional, you will get more points having this exam approved.

Secondly, I plan doing more exercise and sport because I would like to improve my physical conditions and the basketball technic too. Also, I want to be more thin than actually I am (but only a little bit..don't be afraid! hahahaha I'm not sick...). To complete my plan of health, I have proposed drinking 2 liters of water daily and eating low-calorie foods. Simply...be more carefull with my body and health!!

Other goal is refreshing and studying at the library the subjects of my university course because I don't want to forget them while I have no job. To practice it, because my course is very practical and you must be handy-man, I will go to colaborate and help CRUZ ROJA association, working together with dissable patients (my master study has been about dentistry aimed at dissable patients) to carry out their oral treatments.

Finally, I have other goals like as maintain contact with all my friends, including those are not living in Spain actually and I can't meet them when I want. I plan to visit them too, it could be fun...In fact, I would travel to London, Holland or France...very beautiful countries!!!


These goals are complicated but I hope to carry out all of them!!!!

And now.....what do yoy tell me??

Thanks for readind me and your future corrections!! :)

my goals to for new year!!!which do you have?

Hello! I'm sorry for my later second notebook! No need to be sorry :p

I'd like to talk about my goals to for the new year 2013 and you could comment me which are yours. It could be interesting! Don't think?

Well, it's already known that I want to learn english language!!!For that reason I signed up to italki.com but my main goal is to approve or pass the exam called "First Certificate" or "B1 level" and with this website (or simply "site") I try to remember (do you mean, "I want to practice"?) grammar and vocabulary before enter into an official academy. In the same context, I want to pass the intermediate level exam of my community language because it isn't spanish, it's the "valenciano". I am from Valencia city (Spain) and its language is similar to "catalán" (from Barcelona)...I'm not sure you know that I want to what I mean...hahaha! Don't worry: you made yourself clear. because if you want to get public employment oppositional (public employment position?), you will get more points having this exam approved.

Secondly, I plan doing more exercise and sport because I would like to improve my physical conditions and the basketball technic technique too. Also, I want to be more thin than actually I am (but only a little bit..don't be afraid! hahahaha I'm not sick...). To complete my plan of health, I have proposed drinking 2 liters of water daily and eating low-calorie foods. Simply...be more carefull with my body and health!!

Off the topic of language - simply attempting to restrict calories is inneffective.  In terms of putting on weight, a calorie from protein is not the same as a calorie from carbohydrates, for example.  

Other goal is refreshing and studying at the library the subjects of my university course because I don't want to forget them while I have no job. I need to practice it because my course is very practical and you must be a handy-man (A handyman is a noun to describe somebody who performs a variety of manual trades such as carpentry, metal work, plumbing etc. often without a formal qualification. Were you using it metaphorically?). I will go to colaborate and help CRUZ ROJA association, working together with dissable disabled patients (my master study has been about dentistry aimed at disabled patients) to carry out their oral treatments.

Finally, I have other goals like as maintain contact with all my friends, including those are not living in Spain actually and I can't meet them when I want at some point. I plan to visit them too, it could be fun...In fact, I would like to travel to London, Holland or France...very beautiful countries!!!

Let me know if you'd like any advice about London!


These goals are complicated but I hope to carry out all of them!!!!

And now.....what do yoy you tell me??

Thanks for readind me and your future corrections!! :)

A nice entry about your new years resolutions.  If you want to be sure that you'll complete them then I reccommend this website: http://www.stickk.com/.  You can pledge to achieve your goal and if you fail then you have to donate to a charity that you hate!  Excellent motivation to achieve your goals.

My goals for the new year!!! What do you have?

Hello! I'm sorry for my later second notebook!

I'd like to talk about my goals for the new year 2013 and you could comment me which are tell me about yours. It could be interesting! Don't you think?

Well, it's already known that I want to learn English language!!!For that reason I signed joined italki.com but my main goal is to approve or pass the exam called "First Certificate" or "B1 level" and with the help of this website I shall try to remember practice grammar and vocabulary before entering in an official academy. In the same context, I want to pass the intermediate level exam in "Valenciano" which is the language of my community language because isn't spanish, it's the "valenciano". I am from the city of Valencia city (Spain) and its language is similar to "Catalán" (from Barcelona)...I'm not sure if you know what I want to mean...hahaha(!) because if you want to get public employment oppositional, in public service you will get more points having passed this exam approved.

Secondly, I plan on doing more exercise and sport because I would like to improve my physical conditions fitness and the basketball technique too. Also, I want to be more thin slimmer than actually I am (but only a little bit..don't be afraid! hahahaha I'm not sick...). To complete my plan of health, I have proposed plan on drinking 2 liters of water daily and eating low-calorie foods. Simply...be more carefull with my body and health!!

Another goal is refreshing and studying at the library the subjects of my university course because I don't want to forget them while I have no job. To practice it, because my course is very practical and you must be handy-man manually dextrous, I will go to colaborate and help at the CRUZ ROJA association, working together with disabled patients (my master study has been about dentistry aimed at disabled patients) to carry out their oral treatments.

Finally, I have other goals like such as, to maintain contact with all my friends, including those are not living in Spain actually and whom I can't meet them when I want. I plan to visit them too, it could be fun...In fact, I would like to travel to London, Holland or France...very beautiful countries!!!


These goals are complicated but I hope to carry out all of them!!!!

And now.....what do can you tell me??

Thanks for reading me and for your future corrections!! :)

Well done Sara! There is little that is completely wrong, most of my corrections are to make your text sound more natural. However, I do not understand your sentence about "public employment oppositional", so my corrections might be wrong for that.