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First notebook entry: Introducing myself
Hello.
First of all, I'd like to explain why I'm [1] learning English. Today this language is widely spread all over the world, so ''you'll never know'', as they say, when you may need it. Of course I would like to go to study abroad, but it isn't that easy.
Then, My second purpose in learning English is to be able to reading and watching everything in its [2] original language. I think the only way to understand the writer etc. is to read his own words, not the translated ones. No doubt you should know the background of what you are reading, but language is the first step.
Moreover, I'd like to communicate with people from other countries :3 ?? It helps to understand yourself better, I think.
Excellently written.
[1] I changed "I am to "I'm" for the sake of consistency of style. Elsewhere in your post you used contractions: "I'd" "isn't"
[2] its - possessive pronoun it's = it is
I'm sorry, but I'm not sure what :3 means.
First notebook entry: Introducing myself
Hello.
First of all, I'd like to explain why I'm learning English. Today this language is widely spread all over the world, so ''you'll never know'', as they say, when you may need it. Of course I would like to go to study abroad, but it isn't that easy.
My second purpose in learning English is to be able to read and watch everything in its original language. I think the only way to understand the writer etc is to read his own words, not the translated ones. No doubt you should know the background of what you are reading, but language is the first step.
Moreover, I'd like to communicate with people from other countries. It helps to understand yourself better, I think.
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