Masatoshi
It's snowing heavily Today it has been snowing in wide area of Japan since this morning. It took extra 30 minutes to get to my office. The weather forecast said yesterday the highest temperature around my office today would be 3 celcius. As he said so, I feel it's so cool outside I don't want to go out of my office. But I have to go for my lunch. I hope it stop snowing when I go home.
6 ก.พ. 2013 เวลา 3:41
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It's snowing heavily

Since this morning it has been snowing across a wide area of Japan. 
It took me extra 30 minutes to get to my office.
Yesterday, the weather forecast said the highest temperature, in the vicinity of around my office, would be 3 degrees celcius today.
As he said so Like it said, I feel it's so cool cold outside that I don't want to go out of leave my office.
But I have to go out for my lunch. I hope it stops snowing when before I go home.

 

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I hope it stops snowing before I go home

or

I hope it has already stopped snowing when I go home.

 

 

7 มีนาคม 2013
3

It's snowing heavily

Today it has been snowing in a wide area of Japan since this morning.
It took an extra 30 minutes to get to my office.
The weather forecast said yesterday that the highest temperature around my office today would be 3 celcius.
As he said so, I feel that it's so cool outside that I don't want to go out of my office.
But I have to goet out for my lunch. I hope it stops snowing when/before I go home.

6 กุมภาพันธ์ 2013

It's snowing heavily

Today it has been snowing in wide area of Japan since this morning.
It took extra 30 minutes to get to my office.
The weather forecast said yesterday the highest temperature around my office today would be 3 celcius.
As he said so, I feel it's so cool outside I don't want to go out of my office.
But I have to go for my lunch. I hope it stop snowing when I go home.

 

 

It's snowing heavily today

Today, it has been snowing in a large area of Japan since this morning. 
It took an extra 30 minutes to get to my office. 
The weather forecast said yesterday that the highest temperature around my office today would be 3 Celsius. I think they guy was wrong, I felt so cold outside that I didn't want to get out of my office. But I had to get my lunch. I hope it will stop snowing before I go home.

 

NOTE: The english language like many others, require a specific way of saying and phrasing things around.  An American person will say your words similar to what I wrote.  Good try!

9 มิถุนายน 2014

It's snowing heavily

Today it has been snowing in a wide area of Japan since this morning.
It took an extra 30 minutes to get to my office.
The weather forecast said that yesterday the highest temperature around my office today would be 3 degrees celcius.
As he said, its so cool outside that I don't want to go outside.
But I have to go for lunch. I hope it stops snowing (before/while) I go home.

20 พฤษภาคม 2013
It is too warm in england i would love to see more snow but its all gone and i love rain :3 why cant we swap weather :)
15 เมษายน 2013
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